After much deliberation I decided to compare two articles from Kevin Paul Dupont and Joe McDonald on the Boston Bruin’s game six victory in their
Eastern Conference quarterfinal series against the Washington Capitals.
(Seguin sends the Bruins to game seven with this overtime goal)
Kevin Dupont is a writer for the Boston Globe and the papers
hockey expert, covering the Boston Bruin’s beat along with the comings and
goings of professional ice hockey. Joe McDonald is former eighteen year veteran of the Providence Journal who now
writes for ESPN Boston.
Both writers take different approaches in recapping and
highlighting the game. Tyler Seguin’s game winning over-time goal is the main
part of both articles, however Dupont chose to highlight the growth of young
20-year-old Seguin while McDonald focused on Seguin and alternative captain Patrice
Bergeron’s willingness to play through injury.
McDonald’s article recaps the game while quoting head coach
Claude Julien, Patrice Bergeron and Defenseman Andrew Ference. Dupont recaps
the setup of the game winning goal while quoting Seguin, defenseman Dennis Seidenberg, Julien, Andrew Ference and forward Milan Lucic.
While both articles by McDonald and Dupont are practically
the same length 1,138 and 1,135 respectively. They each give very different
perspectives.
McDonald starts by mentioning that less than 21 hours after
loosing game five, Patrice Bergeron was the first player to arrive at the Verizon
Center for game six. He adds that Bergeron’s dedication and willingness to play
is unmatched. McDonald then recaps the game from midway through the third
period when it was tied at 2-2, while quotes from coach Claude Julien on the
growth of Tyler Seguin and Adrew Ference on his maturity despite his young age.
He then uses a Patrice Bergeron quote on the game winning goal to transition the article to the topic
of Bergeron playing the game hurt. He throws in a few more Julien quotes before
ending the piece by saying “The Bruins hope that Bergeron and Seguin can keep
their momentum going into Game 7 on Wednesday.”
Dupont opens his article by writing that the Bruins drafted
Tyler Seguin as a one-day game-breaker however in game six he was a
season-saver. He recaps the game-winning
play before mentioning that Seguin would be a freshman if he was in college and
that this goal may have transitioned him from wunderkid to wily veteran. He quotes Seguin on how he scored before
bringing up how common lucky goals are in hockey. After a further breakdown of
the game ending play Dupont asserts that there was no luck Seguin’s goal, just
skill. He quotes Seidenberg and Julien
before reviewing some of the scoring chances Seguin has had so far in the
playoffs. He throws in a few quotes from Julien on Seguin’s growth and maturity
before quoting Seguin and Lucic on how the play developed. Dupont then compares Seguin’s deek of goalie
Braden Holtby to Bruin legend John Bucyk. He closes the piece by adding that
regardless of whether or not the Bruin’s win the series, "game six might be the
game in which Seguin really grew up."
Although both articles are well written and pointed, I feel
that Dupont’s article a better read. Both pieces quote the coach and Andrew
Ference Dupont goes the extra mile by quoting Seidenberg, Lucic and of course
Tyler Seguin himself.
McDonald’s piece has the feel of something done under deadline that was forced out, while Dupont’s piece has more of a homely feel adding perspective and a bit of history for flavor. While McDonald did focus on Patrice Bergeron’s injury more he missed the main point, the eclectic rise of 20-year-old Tyler Seguin.
McDonald’s piece has the feel of something done under deadline that was forced out, while Dupont’s piece has more of a homely feel adding perspective and a bit of history for flavor. While McDonald did focus on Patrice Bergeron’s injury more he missed the main point, the eclectic rise of 20-year-old Tyler Seguin.
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